The waves in the ocean are nice to hear.
They whisper and tickle inside my ear.
Singing songs of love and some beauty too,
I wish to not leave them and say adieu.
They start soft and low, but soon they grow strong.
Their mists and salty smells are far from wrong.
When I go to the beach I feel so good.
It reminds me so much of my childhood.
Laughing and smiling and just having fun,
I wish to go back and soak up the sun.
But now I must stay in my teenage years,
and watch as my sweet memories appear.
nice job - I especially like the way you divided the stanzas. Each stanza completes a thought, and it is cool the way you set up the poem with a quatrain-couplet-quatrain-couplet format.
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